wow.

So glad Kim's not alone... lol. Love the interesting twist on this particular personality of Shego's!


Wispr

wow exciting story cant wait to read more.

oh this is AWESOME so far!
evil kim is just super kick ** ^_^
can't wait for the next chap

that was unsetelling and creepy foe an opening chapter

I like IT!

I will keep reading.

see you next chapter

hmm, i have to say that i like it so far. the ruthless kim is definitely appealing.

i think the idea of a shego without morals would make an interesting villain.

the story has potential, but i reserve judgment until the end, if it ends tragically or kim goes psycho and kills half the villains, then i will definitely drop this.

God God, man, how do you find the time?

Well, this chapter is by far the best so far, with a lot of things coming together. Still some loose ends, but as usual, a great read.

Drakken was so in-character, I could just hear his whiny accented voice.

Now for the questions re: con-Shego!

Kimmie still in Bada$$-d mode and Shego playing with fire, trying not to get burned. Lovely dialogue, and glimpses into Shego's thoughts which ties together the last few chapters nicely.

Also, lets a bit more KiGo through the cracks, which is always a welcome bonus.

'_'

The carrying of Drakken was a bit confusing, with Kim first taking hold of his lapels, then dragging him with his good leg? And Shego only taking him by the belt? Wouldn't that cause his bad leg to fold under him as he's being moved?

Great use of dialogue to convey Shego's unease with Kim's current attitude.

I'm still wondering exactly where con-Shego is at right now. I mean, if it was me, I'd WANT to get out of the weird semi-limbo that she seems to be in right now and either inhabit a body or physical construct which would allow interaction with "RL".

I've been thinking about why Kim and con-Shego's interaction seemed to have more sparks than bad-Kim and Shego, and I think it has to do with the lascivious interactions that con-Shego had with Kim prior to her wake-up, and the emotionless bad-Kim after waking.

A nice, tight chapter.

Hello, Evil Kimmie!

Damn, she's not in a good space. I'm getting serious torture vibes right now and if Shego's shaken by this, that can't be good.

Aw... dead Shego...

Okay, I personally have a problem with the death of canon characters.. and with Shego sorts of makes the whole KiGo problematic... but if pulled off properly...

Its time for me to turn my attention to your stuff for a while... sorry if I've been busy, but there are so many others I have to catch up on! And I appreciate your patronage with mine::hugs:: so it's about time I return more of the favor.

Nice chapter.

A little more tension in the dialogue. I think I figured out why the last chapter seemed a bit flat where the KiGo was concerned. Because there wasn't any! LOL. Well, more like Kim was just tunnel visioned on what happened to her. With the return of banter in this one, comes a little more tension of the KiGo kind.

So... did Shego not feel responsible for Kim's predicament because she's not "directly" involved? (I'd argue that, since the con-Shego would not have existed without Shego herself co-operating with Drakken. At best, she's an accomplice to his "mucking around" in Kim's head.) Or is Shego more relaxed about mind-control if the target isn't her? Surprised that Kim (still in bad-a$$ mode) seems to have let her off the hook like that.

For the ending, not sure if having Shego's half answer is that effective. Not changing too much, I think there would be more tension to end with Kim cutting back in with her threat and jostle.

A well described fight scene, good dialogue and Kimmie still in bad-a$$ mode.

Shego's got her head in the game, since she's not letting on any of her emotions... and I guess she's clued in that this Kim is not "her" Kim. Wondering why she held back with her plasma, and why Kim would put herself in a position (such as a lock or hold, Kim's not in her battlesuit, right?) that would put the woman at an advantage with her plasma; is your version of Shego's powers lower powered? or is she just that "principled" when it comes to barbecuing people..?

I thought Kim would be a lot more... finessed, I guess is the word I'm looking for, after going who knows how many rounds against con-Shego. I mean, not that Kim would wipe the floor with her, but that the fight would be a little more one-sided.

About the fight... there seemed to be very little... erm... tension? The fight was well described, but it wasn't an edge of the seat fight; a desperate, one small mistake could kill type of deal. It seemed more like a ring-fight; you take some damage, I'll take some damage, but it's all okay. I know that's probably a lot more realistic, but a heightened tension would have taken the fight from "nice" to "great". (See chapter 30 of poetheather's Tangled Up in Green. Admittedly, it's a lethal to-the-death clash, but it's one of the best I've read on ff.n)

Lastly, where the dialogue was great and in-character it just seemed lacklustre for some reason; maybe I'm thinking lack of chemistry. I don't mean that people need to be blushing or teasing or whatever when it comes to KiGo; unless your contrasting it to what the "real" Kim and Shego chemistry is like. Anyway, it's just my 2 cents.

Onto the next chapter.

Powerful. A very power chapter.

Damn, Kimmie's got to be more careful, it's a thin line between submission and death. It's scary how quickly and how easily it can change, and it really doesn't take much.

Kimmie needs some TLC before she kills someone.

Be on the lookout...

Wonderful chapter and I like what you added to the chapter before this. Kim really has an chilling air around her. Good work.

Wispr

Hey this is a great story...one of the best that ive read in a long while! I have to ask if this will eventually be a KIGO...coz all that UST between then is just too hot to pass up!

I love how youve made the story easy to follow just watch when you explaining some fight moves not to over complicate it...coz i found that at some points i couldnt follow.

But i love this story! and there's so many possibilities on where it could go!