Oh my.

This - this is a work of art. It's just so natural, like a photograph of the two of them that you pass on the shelf, and you go "how did they get from that to this", and here is the explanation.

Every little detail of characterization is just so sweet and perfect, and every little moment is just right - especiallyespecially the realization at the end, because oh Gokudera, you oblivious little twit, it /would/ take you that long.

So yes. This was amazing. :D

AW
THAT WAS SUPER SWEET!

I like the way you did the last part, I could literally visualize the scene (and photos). Longish one-shot, but very engaging and nicely characterized. Great job :D

This is...amazing. I have no words. All I can really say is bravo.

This is absolutely fantastic! Your writing is wonderful. I love the way you manage to capture Gokudera's personality and how well everything just flows. The action sequence in particular is very, very well done. I hope to read more like this from you! Keep up the awesome work!

i love your khr stories

It was very cute! I love 8059, thank you for writing this! I like how you put in little clues everywhere. ^o^

I really, really like this.
I think it's one of my favourites. You managed to inspire me to return to my dusty fanfiction folder and actually write something for the first time in a good year and a bit.
You inspired me to write KHR fanfiction on top of that. What I wrote is directly as a result of this, and I gave you credit for sparking my brain off on this in the first place.
It'd be nice if you read it, I'd like to know what you think :)
Back to the main point, I love this fic. It's very sweet and simple and paced incredibly well.
Thanks for posting it!

Oh, that was so sweet and fluffy and cute and it just gave me all these warm fuzzies inside when I read it.

I popped by your LJ to check out your other fics, and I really enjoyed In The Moment as well; is there any chance you'll post that on ? That is one amazing story I'd love to add in my favourites collection on here, since I don't have a LJ account.

Keep up the great work! More 8059 would be much appreciated; writers like you who keep characters IC and have amazing sentence structure and flow come few and far between.

That was so cute! Gokudera's so oblivious. lol
I love them.
Sweet ending.

... that was, simply, one of the best stories I have ever read.

They were so in character, and I really like the feel of the story. Especially the ambush. Despite everything that was going on, it all felt so... calm. And I loved that~

I don't think I've ever read a story this long and paid it my full attention, so wow~ You really are a brilliant writer! I'm definately checking out the rest of your page now...

Aha, forgive the crappy review, I'm not good at wording things ^^;

*smiles* Sweet.

whoa ... this was a really well written story of nice length... i cant wait for more stuff from you

Wow. Just wow.

This is just amazing, seriously. There's this very beautiful chemistry between the characters and i am just awed. I don't normally look at 8059 fics but this just takes the cake.

Anyways, nice story, and I am now bowing down at how long this fic is.

I actually read this over on LJ earlier today, but didn't have time to leave a comment. Then I saw it here, and decided "hey, I'll just review it on fanfiction!"

Not that you really needed to know any of that, but in any case I really like this. I like how you captured the characters, and that you really do leave little clues, even things that Gokudera himself doesn't mention, that pepper the story. That was probably my favorite part. So, great work with this, and I will definitely be adding it to my favorites.