Oh my what a teaser story - but the ending what a delight.

Hahaha!! That last line was classic!! I loved it! Totally made me laugh out loud!
Great chapter! I love how you had Joseph lose it but he did it in a greay way. He waited until it was just him and her and no chance of being interupted. I thought it was great that he threw Clarisse over his shoulder. Too funny!
Thanks for filling us in on who the guy was! It was nice to know that there wasn't anything way crazy going on between them.
Thanks for writing! Can't wait for the next update!
Nikki

This is not the Joe I know from PD1. I don´t like him... But it´s fun, even though he´s a macho. I trust the writer is gay? I felt he might be when I read about him tenderly putting down some papers in a previous chapter. It had to mean something ;).
How is ´consequences of falling´ doing?

OMG! This story is like Mamma Mia! After every scene I thought it cannot be better! :-)

The last comment... I'm still sitting here and laughing so hard!

Loved the TSOM lines *wink*

“Yes, I think you should leave… in the morning.” Loved it!

Nice, I´m still laughing my head off- so much for being the cool guy, right, Joe? ;) LOVELY update, I was so happy when I noticed the next part was posted- thank you very much, hope there´ll be more soon!

Is Antoine trying to find evidence that will vanguish the Von Trokens? The reason why Joe´s feelings had changed (from firmly believing Shades´s gossip to describing it as crap and at the same time still thinking there might be something going on between the Queen and the writer) isn´t clear to me. But looking at his future: the man has other problems now, hasn´t he? :).

Ooh! That was harsh! Although he kinda does deserve it! I don't know...I feel for both of them. I hope they can clear it up soon. And I'm dying to know what the heck that guy Antoine is doing! Seriously! I can not wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for writing!
Nikki

So I just found you and your stories...Im very intrigued by this story. I can't imagine Clarisse not telling Joseph about this guy but Im sure she has a good reason. I can't wait to see what that is...
Please update soon!
Thanks for writing!
Nikki

This chapter was siply brilliant!:-)
I'm so glad they finally talked with each other...
The comment about 'everything is your place' was first class! lol.
PMN!
I love this story!:-)

Oh thank you, Joe- I know, it´s all a huge misunderstanding but she deserves it for simply ignoring him the way she did because it´s just awful, whatever wonderful she´s doing you can´t just leave someone hanging like this when you havn´t seen them for weeks, it´s cruel... Anyway, fantastic update, really made my day and I hope there´ll be more very soon! :D

The Queen is the Queen still, good! I start to dislike Joe ;).

I'm loving it!*wicked grin*
Joe is so jealous! That Lady Chatterly comment was absolutely first class.

It certainly isn´t the Queen´s style to lock herself in with a young man and sleep with him. I agree with the somewhat self-righteous Joe (who only created the monster of jealousy when he slept with his Queen) on that. And I am ever so curious. Just like him. What is the artist doing? Making a drawing of the Queen...for Joe? That doesn´t seem likely somehow. I so hope it is not going to be embarrassing (more of her thighs? I really feel for Joe :)), at least not for the Queen ;).

I´m dying of curiosity... Could you update? :D

"Hoping and praying the stranger would have breakfast alone in his suite or had simply died over night" OMG! Funniest line ever!

"Charlotte. Now… damn, couldn’t that woman be late just once in her life?" Yeah, she comes always the wrong time... Char we love you, but someone should shoot her...

FANTASTIC again! :-)
PMN!

Love Liz