wrong on so many levels

Did I spell that right, In my name I mean... anyway, I know I am kinda late and all with this review but, I have a theory...

Would it not be possible for Gohan to completely destroy Planet Zeon? Then the earth guys could wish him back with the dragonballs right? After all the series is called DRAGONBALL Z!

I'm sorry but I could not read your fanfic.

To show you why:

"Where there was a kingdom that ruled, a very good kingdom there was peace, love, and friendship.

There were also mighty warriors, but they only fought if it was necessary or if an enemy approaches the planet.

The kingdom was very wealthy with gold, diamonds, silver.

Their was also two kings that ruled this kingdom they were both brothers the first oldest brother name Richard the second David, Richard was the oldest and he had his brother rule by his side."

Thats just awful!

Im sorry but i love athena so much becuz shes too sweet and loving. I really like trina and chichi is annoying. Personally i hope gohan stays wth athena because no man in their lifetime will have someone like her.

awsome

This story is fuckin awesome...but it has to many ! and ? everywhere. but other than that its fuckin awesome and one of my newest favs of all time.

I never thought that it was possible to place a '!' at the end of every sentence. You proved me wrong. Wow it is really annoying. Not every sentence needs one.

wait, couldn't the z fighters have just used the dragonballs to wish gohan back home, and then use them to make the zeons forget about him

AND ANOTHER THINK! couldn't goku have just teleported to goku like he did in the first broly movie?

but enough with the flaming, this is really good

Saiyans are too weak in your story...

the story made a great read. it is definitely one of those stories which can be read many times.

very good story i think the ending was a lottle rushed but not too bad.i hope you complet the sequell to this story.

i hopw gohan will be alright he ahs bean under alot of stress latley and chchi isnt helping by yelling at him and althena evry time she talks to did you make chchi so mean and controling in this fanfict.

i think athena being with gohan at night is what isw causing the flashbacks.

im glad gohan swas free also i hope their is a swqell too this and tha it is complet or almost complet cuss this is a relly good story.

cence thatdeminstation i how gohan was being controled i think gohan will be set free.