 oathk33p3r 2009-03-23 . chapter 1Oh man, I really enjoyed this. Like always, your writing is flawless and, frankly, godly.
I love the little details you put in (like Roxas's lollipop)--they really make the characters' actions flow so well...if that makes any sense at all.
Man. This was so cute.
Thank you for existing.
-oathx |
 silver moon droplet 2008-12-27 . chapter 1the a/n made me go aww and laugh.
WHAT WILL THE REST OF THE FIC DO? GOODNESS ONLY KNOWS.
OhmyAxel.
lmao.
“Have you been a good little boy?” Roxas hears him whisper, and he rakes his nails down Axel’s sweating back, fisting the white material desperately, shaking his head from side to side. No, he hasn’t. Oh, God, he hasn’t. He’s been with Axel all year.
He's been a naughty, naughty boy.
sex him yes please.
*drools*
i've missed your akuroku, so fucking hard.
“Hey.” Suddenly, he grips one of the bars and swings in place, keeping his arm taut as he glides through the air inches above the ground. Axel glances up distractedly, struggling in the silence to spark a flame on his lighter. A cigarette dangles from his lips as he arches an eyebrow. “I was thinking about this as I talked to Sora today. We really don’t shoplift enough.”
*snorts* shame on him. shame on him.
oh my god. akuroku. akuroku. akuroku. akuroku. akuroku.
oh my god.
oh my god, you're killing me with it. i love it, so much that it hurts. oh my god. oh my god.
“Do you mean sex slave?” he purrs into Roxas’s ear, and Roxas smiles.
“No.”
“Then fuck that,” Axel laughs. “I’m not doing your laundry. And Jesus, Rox,” he adds sarcastically, “you’re not supposed to actually ask for stuff. It’s supposed to go, ‘Oh, Axel, you’re all I need. There couldn’t possibly be anything more that I could ever want. I love you.’ You know?”
lmao. WIN.
squee. squee. squee.
this line right here -- “An elf hat. You fucking demoting me? I’m Santa fucking Claus, Blondie. Not some gay-ass, little, holly-jolly elf.”
SQUEE SARCASTIC WIN, OF WINLYNESS.
i LOVED IT. OMFG. I WANT ITS BABIES.
It was funny, cute, sweet - and so epic.
Funny as hell.
GREAT JOB MY FRIEND. GREAT JOB. ♥! |
 tyco622 2008-12-27 . chapter 1Aww, that made even me love the holidays. I particularly love the end..."So much for your clean record though, babe." Cue the fangirl squeal.
BTW, your intro/disclaimer? Were you on some drugs or something? That alone had me laughing at the ADD. |
 warm.summer.nights 2008-12-27 . chapter 1CRAZY BRIE NINJA PAL SAYS:
This a adorable, hilaTious, mushy, and altogether a fucking fun time.
Hooray for mallsanta!Axel and all the awesomeness that pours from his very being.
And another hooray for Roxas being corrupted by Axel. It's always a grand ole time.
ELF SORA= WIN.
and LMDFAO at the mattress store. Bad images in my head man. Bad images of teh buttsecks.
AWESOME. |