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irmina
2009-08-28 . chapter 2
What a sensual way of eating ice cream and pizza!
irmina
2009-08-28 . chapter 1
Yay! Zero topping Kaname! Now there's give and take.
Yuuki yaoi lover? Yeah!
nicole
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
they look hotter as a yoai lovers.
mochiusagi
2009-05-16 . chapter 2
ohh kaname should totally do commercials. and he would look hot while watinghte pizza!
YenGirl
2009-05-09 . chapter 2
Oh, full permission granted, Clue - am salivating already! *rubs her hands, crumpling tissues meant for wiping drool*

LOL, Kaname is so cute, loving the sound of his name, realising those who were ogling him were being glared out by Zero! *chuckles into crumpled tissues* Aw, the pureblood is out of his element here *sadistically in love with such scenarios* And hey, is that Zero actually PULLING at Kaname's wrist? In public? *drops jaw and tissues at the same time* It was sweet that Zero and Yuuki did their best to make Kaname feel more comfortable and hey, the pureblood appreciated it!

Hmm, so if Zero got to making cookies, one would end up with significantly less baked cookies than if someone like, say, Cross made 'em? *giggles* But of course we all know which Kaname would appreciate most!

Ah, Kaname and the 'paying' thing - natural leader, eh? He's just like the 'papa' in their relationship if this were a threesome, lucky Zero knew how to defuse that situation without sacrificing his own manly pride! Loved the little banter there... but I'm sure Kaname will be fine by the end of this meal - he's a quick learner, is our darling pureblood!

LOL, totally IC of Yuuki to be messy at eating ice cream and Kaname to want to be absolutely neat about it! *snickers* Zero would be somewhere in the middle, I guess...

Oh, ROTFL! 'Ice cream kind of made Zero... hyper.' - you mean 'horny', dontcha Clue? *grins hugely* Fancy Kaname being flustered by that action! *grins even more hugely until her jaw threatens to unhinge itself* Whew... *fans self vigorously*

Oh yes, Clue! You've made pizza the pefect choice of food here! *giggles* Never seen mozarella in action before, huh... But Zero's reaction was as expected, sweet! 'He always seemed unaffected by Kaname's shortcomings...' - kya... *dreamy sigh*

'Wow... Kaname would never underestimate cheese again.' - *starts snorting* OMG...! *chokes with laughter as pureblood mental powers are employed* Oh, that would definitely come in useful - did you have pizza while writing this, Clue? *giggles herself silly* Wonder what Aido would have thought if he'd seen his beloved neat-as-a-pin pureblood leader with cheese stringing from his lovely mouth! *goes off into laughter again*

Aw, I loved the mental image of Kaname holding that slice of pizza with two hands! *coos at him while wiping tears of mirth from her eyes*

There! See what I said earlier? Kaname's a fast learner, all right... and I loved how he and Zero both knew the latter loved the former's fangs - yummy! Zero getting all worked up by Kaname and pizza was so cute! Totally Lady and the Tramp here... and no prizes for guessing who's which doggie! *squeals* You're a lucky gal, Yuuki, for being able to witness all that! *insanely jealous* And she still says the darnest things *smiles*

Loved how they could be themselves with each other - that's really cool! Thanks for this bonus, Clue!
G-17writa
2009-05-04 . chapter 2
LOVED IT !! you did end it randomly are you going to update it?
fan-fan31
2009-05-04 . chapter 2
this story is just too dear! *wipes tear form eye* ORANGE SHERBERT is my favourite ice cream! and then, when the cheese thing happened in the end,i was thinking about that pasta scene in "Lady and the Tramp," you know... when they picked up two ends of the same pasta, and then they ended up meeting in a doggy kiss? aw... :) Pookie=<3 :P
Hanamaru
2009-05-04 . chapter 2
thanks for the bonus!

Hana
Naurel A.
2009-05-04 . chapter 2
I wasn't really expecting this story to continue, so I was pleasantly surprised to see it updated! And such a fun chapter, too.

Ice cream and pizza... Now I want to eat those. And what do ya know, mint chocolate chip just happens to be my favorite flavor. Though I doubt I'll have as much 'fun' eating it as these three did. Wow, Zero really does get hyper with ice cream. XD Normally he's rather reserved, methinks, but it's as Yuuki said. Our favorite two vampires are not so uptight when around each other, and I love them even more for that. The cheese thing was great, too. Kaname's pretty skilled at 'saving' the cheese. *grins* But heating up the pizza, now that's something really useful. I wish I could do that with the cooled down last pieces when eating! Ah well...

You have a 'good' reason for ending it like that? Dare I hope there will be more bonus chapters after this then? :D Great chapter!
YenGirl
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
LOL, typical of Kaname to sneak into the Sun Dorms to get some action *snickers* and uhm, Zero’s kinda acting uke-ish again! *winces a bit at the ‘"Kaname, I'm still kind of... tender..."’ comment* But it’s so cute that he’d rather just be with Kaname instead of er… being joined… *blushes* Lucky for him Kaname is very patient, huh?

‘Zero, I want you to take me this time’ *eyes widen in delight* Oh, yes! And bless Kaname for wanting to give him fully to Zero! Hey, what’s with all this vulnerability? *hands on hips* I’d say Zero was even more vulnerable to you!

*calms down at Kaname’s reassuring words to a cutely stammering Zero* Hey…! *sighs and puts her hands back on her hips* What’s with all those ‘never dared to even ask’ doubts? I say go for it, Zero!

LOL, his doubts are really just too cute! And Kaname is cute too, in reassuring Zero. OMG, not more tears! *looks around for tissues* Yes, everything will work out as long as Kaname lets someone else dictate the pace… *nods*

Ooh, so the floor got some action first rather than the bed? *giggles* Nice to see Zeo getting a bit aggressive now but still, he’s thoughtful enough to want Kaname to be sure – aw, so sweet! *squeals*

He finally said it – Kaname finally said those three little words! Not sure if Zero heard it though since he seemed rather… er… occupied. *blinks* OK, so he did hear and respond but his attention was still halved *giggles harder* Mm, he made Kaname cry out – nice!

Ah, as expected, our dear hunter’s still shy – kya! ‘Must he stare so intently...?!’ – LOL, I’m afraid he must, Zero! ‘"More than you know..."’ – oh, so you did use this before, Clue! *winks*

Oh wow, Zero actually turned Kaname over! *eyes widen* Onto his hands and knees! *jaw drops open* And Kaname liked it! *jaw hits the floor* And he’s… uhm…. In… *nosebleed starts*

Good that Kaname enjoyed it even though it must have been painful! I liked how Zero zoned out a little then and Kaname loved it even more – he’s already thinking of the next time, for Pete’s sake! O.O Oh, LOL, to think even the the humans in the Sun Dorms can hear them *giggles*

‘(Kaname probably had more endurance with this sort of thing.)’ – oh yes. Definitely… :D *still blushing furiously at the evidence of Zero’s pleasure*

Well, it’s nice that Zero hasn’t forgotten about Kaname’s need… uhm, two hands, too! *grins in delight*

‘"Come on, Kaname... Say my name for me..."’ – yeah, baby! Right on, Zero! You got your pureblood all blushing now, cool! *smiles proudly at him*

I like how Kaname could tell Zero was having fun and I like how Zero could tell that Kaname knew… it’s kinda sweet! ‘Definitely gonna get it later’ – yup, Zero… so enjoy it while you can! LOL… *swoons as Kaname gets his own high*

*opens her eyes to see it’s morning* Oops, Yuuki’s back! And I like how both boys were slightly nervous yet not wanting to lie to their dear girl. LOL, and the way they greeted her in their own fashion was nice too!

Ah, so she can be astute when she wants to be… bet she just thought they were friends! Oh, stop blushing, Zero! You got to top Kaname just last night, remember? *huffs at him*

‘"All right... Now get off me, you horny, obnoxious little--"’ – Only, Zero… *sighs in satisfaction* Only Zero can talk like this to Kaname and get away with it… *sighs again*

Hey, Clue! *removes letter opener from eyesocket* Have you written about that ice cream place yet?
xPitchxBlackxWingsx
2009-04-15 . chapter 1
LOLOL kaname in doggy style o_0 now thats a mental image right there...one that will earn a giggle from me. or maybe two! XD well, i liked the lemon a lot FAVE XD *_* lol i swear you're going to get so many faves from me soon its not even funny lol xP and yuki, yaoi fangirl? xD Zero was so cute in teh end x3 love it! nice job ^^
aisha4senru
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
this is the supposely the "One shot" ending of the Used, Right?
*Tumbs Up!*
Good as always!
shadowninja-yuna
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
Haha, I don't like Yuuki much but I liked her here :)
Kitsune Demon Girl
2009-03-26 . chapter 1
Totally awesome x3
And you're right, accepting Yuuki is much more bearable in the yaoi world *nods in agreement*
Alix26
2009-02-10 . chapter 1
omg i was ao fearful of this cause Kaname was uke but i loved it -gushes embarassedly- very good^,^
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