 Six-string Samurai 2008-12-27 . chapter 1I think I would've gone with Kim staying dead, this kind of feels tacked on, but overall it was a decent conclusion to this mini-fic. This last chapter moved a little fast for me, especially compared to the pace that you'd set in the first two, but I guess there wasn't a whole lot more you could have done without dragging it out ad infinitum.
Kudos, and Happy Holidays. |