aw. the most sweet and cute fic ever! at least the one i've read about them :D looved it! it was so great and it fit the song perfectly :D really liked the pairing. never considered until 1hour ago and started looking and this is the first fic about them i've read :D .. soo cute! adore it. Scorpius was perfect *-*. and i've been imagining that Draco had a past with Harry and that's why he told his son he'd end up being hurt by Potter u_u. but that's me, a huge drarry fan :D Loved it. Love, Pads.

I really like this one too. You're a great writer. It's sad to see you've stopped writing in

I like most things about the story, but I do have one complaint. It's one thing to have a story inspired by a song, but I kind of wish you hadn't used lines from said song as dialogue in the story. It's a little on the cheesy side and based on the rest of the story, which is awesome, I know you can come up with more original dialogue. Good story, other than that one thing. :D

This was cute. I absolutely love the pairing, and this is pretty well written.

However, I do think that some of the dialogue was taken a little too directly from the song lyrics. I'd have enjoyed the fic much more if you'd created original conversations that weren't so focused around the song. Remember, songfics aren't supposed to be a prose version of a song starring your favorite characters: it's supposed to be based on the song with lyrics woven throughout.

Also, I'm not really sure that the ending of the fic worked with this song. If James is proposing, he's proposing. The idea of a Romeo and Juliet-type of romance is that IS whirlwind, that it IS too fast to make sense any logical way, but they do it anyways.

Please don't take this as a flame. I am just making suggestions based on my own personal preference. I truly enjoyed your fic and I encourage you to keep writing!

Loved Draco in this fic.

I love you so much for writing this! Actually I should be unpacking, but I couldn’t resist and had to read this. It’s J/S! And it’s fluffy! I normally don’t like songfics that much, but I really like this song. Taylor Swift’s songs are always like a short, little story and this one is… uhm… It’s… xD like a fairytale and you captured it very well.
I really adore this type of fic. =) James’ I’m-his-knight-in-the-shining-armour tendencies are impossible to dislike and the thought of him feeding Scorpius the Canary Cream made me laugh so hard. I wish I had a picture of him trying to fight the peacocks. Or a picture of Draco, showing the peacocks a photo of James, so they won’t let him in. xDD
And Scorp is adorable (Draco too: "Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy!" xDD ) I always appreciate melodramatic Malfoys. xD

This made my day! Thank you so much!

Lovely how you tied in the Romeo and Juliet theme.

lol
i love that song
i like how you weaved it in there

aw... so cute!

Aww, so cute! (and well written, yay!) And, while I was reading it, Love Story started to play on itunes! Which made it all better!