Love this.

This was absolutely amazing. *grabs tissues* Great work!

Very Nice

Really enjoyed it

Keep up the great work

I'm sorry, I can't see paragraphs 1 & 3. No one acting in character.

If they 'searched every inch' how did they miss the x?

Good interpersonal drama but I can't see the action.

Oh, very nice, Oz! I didn't see this one over at NFA. I love moments...if that makes any sense.

Thank you for this story, it was very moving. Poor Ziva who thought she was dying, poor McGee who couldn't do anything but hold her. And I love happy endings.

McGiva angst with a happy ending-what more can you ask for?