Okay, I just want to say that I LOVE THIS. That was amazing. It had me laughing, it put me in suspense, and it made me feel bad for Hayner. There was an array of emotions just in this oneshot that wasn't very long, and I think that it's a skill as a writer to engage the reader enough for them to feel such things. I would fav this more than once but I can only do it once (bummer), so I will. :p

I loved the voice and tone of the story, the beginning and the ending--The writing sucked the reader in effectively and held the interest until the very end. I loved the quirky punchline at the end, it was priceless. Keep up the amazing work, this fic was epic.

Pft. God, I'm going to die laughing! Oh man...

Pft.

Bwahahahahahahahahahaha gota ADORE FOR LIFE! Oui, ma cherie, Axel can be a bit of a **. But we all still love him, don't we? Bunch of masochists we are, heeheheh. Ow poor Hayner... Bwahahaha romcoms make me laugh. Then raise a sardonic eyebrow and comment on how tense they all are and pair the characters crackishly with everyone else. Even the two dogs that fall in love. Urgh, tangent much? Sorry. I really like this one. O_o Axel don't put poor Hayner into situations where he'll get punched. Unless it involves Seiner... heheheh

That is... adorable. Like... so cute. Oh my god. And just so.. probable. XD Hayner wants a dramatic-remember-forever-first-kiss, and instead he gets ow-my-head-wait-Seifer-and-I-what?

AH. I LOVED IT. You can tell I really love things when I go 'AH.' xD Really, really good! Their characters were amazing, and I love your description of just that one moment in time. Great job! :3

HA! axel u pyro **!
i luv him though^-^

lol Poor, misguided Hayner. Nice job, Axel. I agree, totally worth it. ^_^ Great fic. Loved it!

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Poor Hay Hay x3