hi, its good, just one problem that you've probably already heard about. voldies birthday is the 1st january 19 (something)

other than that its good

oh, voldie wouldnt love anyone

and he didnt kill them like that.

well done anyway.

oh GOD I love this! The last bit where Voldemort kills James...fantastic...*sniff*...you know, I should hate you for almost making me cry and for making me really sad...I just worship u...

Good story...very interesting theme.

*whispers* I loved it

*jaw drops* I have suddenly been sucked into the pairing of Voldemort and Peter Pettigrew. This is *your* fault, you brilliant, brilliant person. Gaaaa! I now want more on this pairing and i'll never be able to find it! Grr..