 Dark Fortresses 2008-12-27 . chapter 1There are three things I don't get about this story.
1)The title. Please exlain to me why you called the story "Horny".
2)I would also like you to explain this. i What…?/i
3)I would also like you to explain to me how this happened. “So ithat’s/i where that went!”
I'm not a fan of yoai, and I don't see how this can be yoai, but other than those three things, I thought it was good. Congrats. |