Good chapter :)

...I was scared before, but now I'm terrified.

Mel

This sends shivers down my spine, espically the last part (what I said about spelling earlier? Still my issue)

Mel

OMG, this story is AMAZING and I can't wait to read more! Please update soon, I really want to know whats gonna happen next!

It's been a while since I've reviewed the story before this..
Anyways I can't wait for the next chapter...
Please update soon!!
5/5 stars

aww! i really wanted to read Edward's reaction to his precious volvo meeting its untimely demise!!
Other than that, this is really confusing unless you really concentrate on whats happening at different times. i had to re-read a few times but i'm getting it...i think :S
Keep going, i really like your writing style

um CONFUSED

what the CRAP im very confused so ill just read the next chapter now

WTH!? Why did you have to end it there? You're so evil! ^^ But that first chapter confused me a little...I don't understand how that fits into the story at all...

By the way...hi again! ^^; 'member me? I reviewed "Beautiful a few weeks ago (I finally finished reading the rest of the Twilight series, yay me!)

Great job- please update again soon!

*SB*

HOLY ** ** THAT WAS INTENSE!
pardon my swearing...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON OR I WILL DIE.

OH MY GOD THE VOLTURI KILLED EDWARD ?NO OMG PLZ PLZ PZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON!

OMGG suspenseful

wait, what? what just happened? i got everything but the gust of wind and edward leaving. apart from being confused, this is really good. i love the details that you put into this story because it made it seem very realistic (you know, apart from being vampires) i really liked this so plz uupdate soon!

Ok so wait, Edward’s gone? Didn’t see that coming… And why Edward? Couldn’t Jane have magically disappeared in some giant gust of wind? Great chapter, though! Even though I was kinda confused, I was still on edge throughout the whole thing! This story is really good so far and I can’t wait to see where you take it, so please update soon!

Ack, oh noes! D: Slightly confusing, but easy to keep up with. Great chapter! ;)

Update soon,
Kolored. ^^