 SasukeBlade 2008-12-28 . chapter 1You know, I rarely say this for stories, but that was cool! They were all so professional about it, even when they made mistakes. I liked how Khetala's otherworldly knowledge helped to spin the plot around them as they journeyed, and how you described things. Getting the loot by actually cutting the beast's fangs off was inspired, as was having Anais Nin become paralyzed for a minute by the reflected spell. Not only did you cover the Rebena Te Ra part, the reminiscence part of the prompt came through easily with them drawing on their past experiences in order to defeat monsters. Awesome job! |