This is great! You write awesome. Something you could improve on though is your paragraphing which could be more spread out and such and such. Great Job! Keep on writing!

i really like this story i hope you finish it

really really good chapter!

Nicely written chapter. i liked the way you handled the van scene. Edward wasn't even needed with buffy around. okay,l it would've been nice if he had ran over to help buffy as well but he was probably too busy making sure that bella was okay Carlisle will be able to patch buffy up, i'm sure he will.
i can see your point about the film. Rob Patterson could have done a better job of playing Edward. it seemed a little awkward between him and bella, too awkward at least. it kinda ruined the movie for me.
anyway, back to the fic. I'm glad you updated and i really can't wait till you update again!

O_o Okay what happened to Edward coming to the rescue who could have helped prevent Buffy getting semi crushed between the two cars?? *lol* Why didn't he simply at least jump in to save Buffy, even though his original intention was to probably save Bella, if Buffy hadn't pushed her out of the way instead?

OME!
Im so happy you wrote another chapter, cant really wait to see edward and bella relationship to develop...



please dont take long cause im dying

Ah I'm sad I was hoping for a Spike/Bella and Angel/Bufy fic

Just discovered this story. It's very good. Please write more when you get a chance! :)

Yay another chappie. I absolutely loved this chapter! I hope you make Buffy stronger than a "normal" slayer since she's going to be meeting the Cullens. And since they are a stronger race of vamps so should Buffy because a weak Buffy is not a happy Buffy!^_^ So I'm going to assume that Edward can't read Buffy's thought either? Hm so sad. Oh before I forget please include Buff in the baseball game; I can definitely see some potential with that. Can't wait for the next chappie *hint,hint*

personally, i really hope you don't make buffy weaker than the cullens.
she still is the vampire slayer, and supposed to be stronger than vampires,
and since your including the two stories & the cullens are vampires, she should be stronger.
you should make a chapter in edward's pov, i think a lot of people would like that.
thanks for updating, btw. (:

I love it keep it up. ^_^

i love it

That was so cool! I love Buffy and Twilight! They're my all time fav vampire shoe/book! Edward is so cute! I like taht Giles is in this. I was worried you wouldn't bring him in but THANK YOU SOO MUCH for doing it! He may be a stuffy prat sometimes but I still like him. Will anyone else from the Buffyverse be makign an appearance? Will Forks turn into another hellmouth? Will Angel be in this so it's like a double romance? Will the Cullens be able to prove to Buffy that they aren't a threat? Will Alice have any vissions of Buffy and Bella? Wow, that's a lot of questions. I'd better stop now before I do a Willow and completely lose you. -grins sheepishly- I love your fic so can you PLEASE update soon? I REALLY wanna know what's gunna happen next!
PS. The longer the chapter the better, just a hint ;)

waiting till next chapter
love it!

XOXO

I wish you would make the pairing Bella/Spike. The Buffyverse vamps are way cooler!