Hi! it was a cute story! what is bothering my mind is how the pow works...it remember me of something...a Twilight Zone's episode maybe?

anyway, it was fun

Hahahaha, love the Simpsons reference. :P

Very original, and certainly entertaining. Well done.

A couple things I would like to point out though: I got a little confused about what they were trying to black-mail that low-level mazoku about (though otherwise I found that part highly entertaining), and I would have liked it if you had given an actual description of Zelgadis' human form- since we only ever see it once or twice in flashbacks, so a lot of us probably aren't very familiar with it. Finally, I would like to point out that the only reason that Xellos agreed not to use the paw for world desruction was because it is beyond the paw's power. At least that's how I interpretted it.

I also liked how you threw in Naga there, and how she's been asking for money a lot lately. Hehe. I guess Naga's having a tough time getting by without Lina.

Once again, good job.

very well written, original, and fun to read. I like how you ended it, and that you didn't leave us hanging for years on end. Thank you!

Aw, this story was really cute! _ I liked it.