The idea of twins is wonderful. It's what made me click on this link in the first place. Two crows at once is interesting. I have a few questions tho.

1)In the first section, why do only one of the sisters have a voice that is 'hollow and ghostlike' and the other doesn't? One gave into the whole spooky goth thing and one didn't?

2) Are the attitudes of some people going to be explained? The actions of the police officers is a bit extreme. Sure, there are corrupt cops out there, but I doubt any cop would purposfully do something that would lead to any sort of investigation that he would then have to work hard to cover up, even if he could lead the investigation away from himself. That's a bit too much trouble for what they did. Is there some alterior motive, like revenge against these sisters for something they did other then them being "hot"?

2) The sisters themsleves are not very sisterly toward each other (telling each other to shut up and whatnot). Now, I'm not saying they should be, but an explaination for why they are so harsh to each other would be appreciated. Otherwise I feel like I'm missing and important part of the storyline.

Thanks

cool

Pretty sick stuff, man.

Again, I like.

An excellent piece of work that brings out the feel of the films.

And the female twins? Nice touch.

Will it ever be updated?

spiffy i like it... and you actuly have chicas as the crows! thats the only thing i dont like avout the movies (all 3) is that its always the dudes that come back..the 2nd i can understand it the father that comes back but i want one to have a chica come back... but then again chances of another comming out is rather slite i think

intresting i like it please have more out soon i want to know what A) happened to then (tough i can gess) and B) what their going to do bout it (mainly i want to know b) anyway great cant wait to read more

This is one of those stories that I was shocked to see on here. Impressively done and one that stands out with a vision created by James O'Barr. I penned an original Crow story titled "Ghosts Of War." It is my first historical fiction piece and wanted to write a crow set in WWII. This is one that has a good concept behind it, you might want to check out the Crow story titled "War Party." I found this one on here and it is the only one that is G rated.

Has the makings of a good Crow fic, but if I may suggest something: Make them wear the opposing masks. One in Irony one in Tradgedy

I know its been a long time since you wrote this story but I enjoyed it and would like to read more of it.

Very nice beginning. Please write more, I'd like to see what happens.

good start, keept eh story comming.