all right, I read the last chapter. Thats a nice ending. Another great idea making Bulma make androids too. I have a question. Did Arale age?

The concept of arale marrying 17 is pretty crazy. Wierdly Awesome, too. She seems a little girly, though. but I can see someone characterizing her like this to make a serious story (otherwise she's just dominate it, lol) It's always nice to read dr. slump fanfiction. Can't wait to see what happens!

This would have made a whole lot more sense if I had seen the movie and/or gt episodes that had to do with Super 17... unfortunately I did not... and yet somehow, I managed to find this story quite entertaining...

the only possible problem I found was that Arale seemed a little... shallow? i'm not sure if that's quite the right word... but it's a start...

that may have very well been intentional, and if so, you did a great job, if not, well it's a note of contention, you might decide to do something about if you ever edit this piece.

still... it's very nice, and has some interesting moments to it... very well done... Congratulations!

Arthur E. King

Hey Rivka! Kick ass fic! I can't wait for more chaps! Now that i'm not grounded any more, i can come back more often! yay!

...End? Yikes! I did NOT see that coming... *sigh* A little depressing, but... I suppose it couldn't really have gone well without bordering on unbelievable... A great series, I loved every bit of it!

Hey Rivka! Kick ass fic! Poor Arale, I hope Juunanagou comes back to normal soon. _

Konnichiwa! This fic is getting better and better...I can't wait for chap 4. hurry and write...fast...-Bonnietta-san

Go, Arale! Kick their A$$e$! _ Looking forward to the next chapter.

oh no! juu-kun's gone! i can't wait for the next chap...this fic gets better and better!

Hell yeah! I love where this fic is going! I can't wait for the next chap...You go girl...17 is the best!