The buxom blonde walked up to him, her chest heaving with every breath, the sweet glistening across her skin. Starsky swooped her up forcibly, taking her into his strong arms and kissing her deeply. He heard a moan escape from her full moth as he shoved his tongue through her lips, demanding entrance.

Seriously, get yourself a beta.

sorry for the lack of reviews recently-I've been out of circulation due to bereavement. I've loved this story from the start-and although it's coming to a close I just wanted you to know that you're an excellent writer! Sincerely hoping you hae plenty more up your sleeve-now I'll wait for the ending and look out for more of your stories!

Another great chapter from you but now what is going to happen I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter hope it will be soon.

More angst? How much more can we take? LOL I just hope that they can get her help quickly.

omg...shes hurt..?? looks like the worst is over with..great chapter

I don't know if my stomach can take being tied up in a knot for too much longer...you certainly know how to keep the tension going!

I can't believe that you have left another chapter on cliff hanger again I just love it can't wait for the next chapter hope it will be soon. Thanks again.

Wow, you certainly like to end in cliffhangers!

I know Sherri could kick his **! It would be great if she starts helping the boys out of this nightmare!

omg..you stopped there...I could see this happening ..great chapter ..I cant wait till you post the next..dont know how there gonna get out of this one

Aw Delia, I was so relieved that Starsky is still alive and now You make me fear again!You're so mean.

Hugs,
Nelleke

Am really enjoying this story. My only 'complaint' is I wish the chapters could come a little faster...sigh. I understand things getting in the way, like RL, but it's really frustrating to have to reread the previous chapter when a new one is posted to jog my old brain cells. Unfortunately, too many stories are being posted on ff and never completed so I've started a new habit of waiting until the story is complete before reading it. However, I had already started reading yours before that happened. Anyway, please post again soon and keep up the good work!

How could you leave the chapter like that now I will have wait for the next chapter I hope it will be soon. can't wait.

Poor old Starsky! You do like to pile on don't you! The thing is I enjoy it when you do!! Keep it coming. thanks.

This story just gets better and better. You've generated so much tension with Starsky in continual danger and Hutch helpless to stop the threat. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Another nice angsty chapter!! Full of great emotions, action and dialogue! Poor Starsky!