Ohh, This is good!
I like how it is brief and to the point. The story was going along, and it had some pre-Mary's-Death John and then-BAM! Hunter John kicks in and foils those he thought he could trust
Nice

Even if a bit beyond the limitations of a drabble, this was a masterpiece. It worked perfectly and I loved the way you portrayed John. I really have to hand it to him, he got out of that situation brilliantly; though I can't believe the social worker was stupid enough to believe a word about turning up at his office.

And I totally adored the character of Mike in 'Home', so I'm absolutely glad you found a way to give him credit here; I mean you could clearly discern that the man had been honestly worried about the well-being of John and the children. Too bad he never realized that the two grown men standing right before him, questioning him about John Winchester, were the very kids he had tried to protect all those years back.

Excellent work!

I like the originality of this, and I like the sense it gives of John as a maverick/renegade.

Hey Sensue.

i like that, see for me, John is a good man but his life is suddenly overwhelming and he just copes in the only way he can. You caught that here. His desperation but love for his boys. Nice thank you for sharing. DBB x

That was very different. Very good.

Sad, beautiful and realistic.

I have to admit, though I can understand what drove Mike to the decision to call CPS on John and the kids. They were worried sick about the little family and only wanted to help. Okay, it back-fired and Daddy Winchester was actually right about the demons and stuff but he probably didn't blame his friend for anything in the end.

Also, the talk Sam and Dean had decades later in "Home" with their father's co-owner bore witness to the fact that while Mike didn't regret calling in the officials (becase he cared deeply for the three Winchester men), he did hate himself a bit for losing his friend and the little ones like that.

Great idea for a drabble and very well-written.

This little tidbit is just excellent -- sad but probably very close to true in the context of the, well, saga... Well done!

Go John! Run! Really great job.

Intense. I can't imagine anything more scary to John than the prospect of loosing his sons. I also can't imagine any force is the world that could keep them away. Nice Drouble - Double Drabble.

Aw, tough topic. Heart-wrenching and well done.

Nice one! Great use of the word.

Phoebe

Woah I can totally see that.
Stupid meddlesome idiots!
Awesome job!

Great use of the word!! liked this one!!

Jade

Angsty, tension and a nice little glimpse of how John got the boys away. I liked it.

oh. so tense. i feel a little worked up. good for John for taking care of his kids.