Hi there, and Happy New Year!

So, I don't know a thing about this show (book? movie? See: I got nothin'!) I don't even know which is the original character, although I'm guessing Angie, but just because your main OCs are usually female. Anyway, I think that my inability to tell who's canon and who's original once again speaks to your amazing ability to seamlessly weave in original characters who fill voids and are so well developed on their own that they become essential to the whole thing. I saw an ep. of Star Trek, TNG yesterday for the first time in a couple of years and I couldn't help but miss Leo. You've spoiled me!

Being from outside the fandom, I can't say if you should continue or not, but this is really well done. The last paragraph is such a nice bit of tension and doubt in the midst of the rightness. I can certainly see potential for more.

-Liz

First: Loved this a lot. I like the way you've found Ham's voice.

Second: It's positively eerie how many of "my" fandoms *you* write in. I've been working on a V story for a while, but haven't yet posted it.

I do hope you continue/revisit this.