Continue! pLs!!

HRM...very interesting concept for a story. Very well done! I like how you switched between the perspective of the fairy tale and then Raven's darker reality. Very cool. I hope this isn't a one-shot because this idea definitely has a set of legs on it. You could visit various parts of her life with this storybook idea; it'd be quite interesting I think. Anyway, keep up the good work! Happy New Year!!

I've got a soft spot for dialogue-free writing, and this is a very fine specimen. Love the title too, by the way; it's very conflicting in the emotions and imagery it elicits, which is very fun.

Bonus: methinks you've just kicked me into another chapter for Visions.

-John

It worked. Damn well, as a matter of fact, and the two stories make each other work. I still can't think of another author that does all /this/ (gestures) without a single word in dialogue. You use actions, emotions, and descriptions like they are speech-- I love the description of four Titans by their eyes (Gar's stayed with me). After reading this, I want to know the full story. You do your thing with oneshots, so I've been filling in around the frame. You always seem to leave room for another interpretation.

Speaking of that, I'll cut the review short because I think my Victor-darling finally showed. I love stories that make me want to go write--I think it's one of the best things you can do in a story.