... I know I would be killed if I whoop that Reaver is dead... though i do feel sorry for sparrow for this to happen to the person she likes in this fan fiction... so yeah... Still don't like that bastard XD but yeah, love the chapter and man, that's one of the coolest ways to go XD
Hope there's at least an extra ending or something to wrap this all up... or an unexpected one! o0

-Lisa, Leader of Anime Fan Team

Ahaha... As much as he was cool when he was alive, he got what was coming to him. XP It's amazing that you updated though. And I might be wrong since I don't feel like going and checking, but it seems like your writing has gotten better. ^_^ Update again soon. You only have 3-4 chapters left. XP

its good plz upgrade soon

I really like how well thought out this story is! I haven't read many stories that deal with Reaver LOSING his immortality, while Sparrow lives. It's always the other way around :P

Anywho, keep on writing! You've got an awesome style. I love reading it :P The reason I'm only reviewing /this/ chapter is because I kinda spent most of last night reading the whole thing :)

<3 xLHx

Poor sparrow...
This is really a wonderous story. I hope that you will continue soon**

I officially love this story!! The first story I read about Fable! Keep up the Awesome work

Oh, I hope you update eventually! I check back every day to see if there's another chapter. This story is one of the most well-written works that I've seen in Fable fanfic, and trust me, I've been searching trying to find something half this good. No luck yet. I'm really enjoying it and can't wait to see how everything is resolved!

Wow. With all these depressing thoughts, Sparrow might just turn emo. XD But uh... yeah. I feel bad for Sparrow. All she wants to do is be with Reaver, but she just has to go and save the world before they can really be together. It's unfortunate for her. ^^; But at least things with Garth bothering them are fairly cleaned up now. ^_^

This story is fantastic! Keep writing! You've done a great job fleshing out the characters, and I love love LOVE the new adventure you've got for them after the fall of Lucien. Destroying the Shadow Court and all that--brilliant. Anyway, it's marvelous. I can't wait to see what happens! I'll keep checking back!

yay! up-date soon! omg no screw albion! reaver + sparrow 4ever!

Excellent update! :) I feel sorry for Sparrow having to choose between Reaver and Albion. Hopefully things turn out alright :3

-Fae

Geez, how would you choose between the two?
Albion, or Reaver?
...
I'd probably go with Reaver.
xD

And it's no problem with the updates, yeah? School tends to take up most of my time, so I'm guessing it does the same for you.
Just take your time.
:D

Couldn't Theresa just make a potion that would keep Reaver young too? Anyway, I'm glad you updated. It's been like... forever since you last did. But school is a good excuse for that, I suppose. Especially math class. XD Update again soon! ^_^

dangit! the one place that they try to stay away from is the place they have to go? DAMN! Anyways, love confession is so sweet, yet sad! TT~TT I saw it coming it still hurts! WHY?! Will this be a sad love story?! DON'T LET IT BE TRUE!
Update soon, pweeze. And yes, school suxs... Lisa is dropping one of her classes... it's killing her...

-Marielle, Co-leader of Anime Fan Team

I've old read to the third chapter, and I can't help but feel a little annoyed that the Reaver in this story is... a little tiny incy-wincy tad bit out of character... I remember that Fable, when posting information about him on wikipedia, stated spasifically he was a self-absorbed pirate. Like Jack Sparrow, but you know, without dread locks and funny speech and such.

I know that I sound like a hater right now, but despite what I said, I really am looking forward to reading the rest...