Nice. You did awesome, making sure it didn't get repetitve at all. I love the way he sees Rebena Te Ra, as opposed to someone else who would just think of it as another dungeon. Good job, can't wait to see more.

I really like the little vignettes.

Andy's reminiscences about various visits to Rebena Te Ra. It must have been exceedingly painful to bury the dead newbie Garrett when Jake's spells failed to save his life after one of the battles. T_T But thanfully, Lulie had a better knack for spellcasting than Jake did; hopefully it prevented such mishaps from occurring afterward.

I know one of the artifacts you can get is a Defense +2 "teddy bear," kind of like the Magic +9 "Ribbon" that my own caravan found (another crossover reference in my plot, btw)...was the rag doll a reference to it? And lol, Sheula's reaction to the doors that only opened only when caravanners take magical damage was exactly like Anais Nin's in my own challenge response.

Nice job. And you're probably the only other taker to my "Rebena Te Ra" challenge.