hello there! i can't seem to find that story about noah befriending marta (or are my eyes already starting to fail me?) anyways, i like the cultural references made in this story, it made it more realistic and i can also feel that cosy festive mood. in terms of the story itself, i think that you have good transitions and you were able to make the reader see the setting (which not every writer can do).

anyway, it was really really nice reading this, and i hope you would write more.XD

-yujin

I thought I reviewed this for some reason. Anyways, very nice. I like the concrete details, and I especially liked the presence of Marta, who I thought might be the alter of Martel. She and Alfons ought to date. That would be cute.

What a great story it was very beautiful!

wow, what a beautiful story, I am so honored, thank you so very much!