I love your writing! It's exquisite! So thoughtful and intricate! I love how you weave plotlines to the point where a reader cannot guess what will come next. I've read this story about 9 times and I adore it! I love your long Labyrinth fictions and ADORE the Snape Hermione interaction - it's so well written. You haven't updated in forever! I check every day almost - and I understand life gets busy. Is there any possibility you could put a note in your profile saying when you might update next? Even if it's not till next year - just an estimate of time - would make me very happy! You write brilliantly - so I won't nag with "update soon please" - although I'm hard pressed not to - instead - just please let us know approximately when you might be able to write again - so that I can stop checking daily. That'd be great. Either way - rest assured as long as it takes - I'll squeal with glee when you do update!

'yet, Binns had died, and rose to teach his class, as if nothing, not even death had mattered more'

I have to say, that this line is clever! It really made me think. I am now so glad that I discovered this story. Keep up the excellent work.

Cap ;)

I just finished reading this story in one sitting...it was spectacular!! I hope you're planning to continue this story. The interactions among (and within) the characters are intriguing, and the fact that Hermione tried to take down LM by forcing him to pay his house elves is priceless. Take care, -DP

Watching Sarah and Jareth's relationship changing for the better is a treat. I loved the scene where she proclaims herself the Goblin Queen and the results. Severus and his thoughts about Hermione is being shaken up and reevaluated. I loved the last part of Chapter 20 where she admits that she wanted to ruin Lucius and the insult was a bonus. Severus is in for a rough time dealing with Sarah and Hermione. I can't wait to read more.

Oh you definitely have me hooked on this story! Update soon?! :)

I love Hermione! She is excellent - very smart, very ruthless, and going after Malfoy Snr. at 14. Please, please update - I want to know what happens with Sarah, Jareth, Snape, Hermione, the bogles, and everyone else.

Happy Writing,
Hedwig1220

:( are you ever going to update this? It's really good so far.

I have to say this story is impressive with the way that you've intertwined the two different stories. I am not really into reading Labyrinth/HP crossovers, but this one is worth reading.

This is such a great beginning! Very promising. I'll definitely have to read on. I can't believe that I haven't ran across this story before! Excellent job :D

This is a great story, intregue, romance, angnst. Keep up the good work.

Woah I love how you've crossed these and I can't hardly find the seams X'D I especially love how you chose to portray Hermione. Awesome reasoning and I can't wait to read more. *munches on popcorn*

Oh, I really like this story. Especially Hermione. This is the most interesting interpretation of her I've seen in a while.

Wow! Who knew that Hermione could be so ruthless! Bravo! Bravo!

I'm loving this fic! You have interesting ideas about the characters that I'm sure a lot of other people never even considered about them. I love your talks- I hope that to read the next chapter in the near future.

I love it. I read all twenty chapters that you have up without stopping. I don't typically like crossovers but you have blended the world of the Labyrinth and Harry Potter so believably that it sucked me in. I hope you update soon. I look forward to seeing where you're going with this. Until then I suppose my own imagination will have to do even though I'm sure it won't compare to anything you will come up with. :)

Sarah was spot on in her accessment of the Wizarding world's woes and complacencies. Wow, talk about it taking an outsider's eye to sum up a situation and come to a conclusion faster than one in the thick of it, hey? Now all we need is for Sarah and Hermione to team up and work together to work on resolving the inadequacies of the wizarding world's political and social structure and/or systems.

Well done--keep up the good work!
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