 kmissypink3@aol.com 2009-06-09 . chapter 5 e! I loved them! especially taste lol. so cute. stupid sasuke. |
 Song Of Eternity 2009-02-27 . chapter 5Touch and Taste were my favorite... I loved the idea behind touch and taste was just sweet... On to the next story! |
 lovesrainscent 2009-02-01 . chapter 5So very nicely balanced contrasting the medicine from Kabuto with Kabuto himself and Orochimaru's weakness yet still enough strength to take Kabuto's hand and have him stay. *sigh* |
 Tabby-chan 2009-01-31 . chapter 5 Yay!! i like this one! kissy kissy! |
 Kyuuka-Kyubi 2009-01-30 . chapter 5That was so cute and sweet! ^^ I thank you for writing so many OroKabu fanfics. =) Hope to read more in the future. |
 Selvanic 2009-01-29 . chapter 5OMG! I love this~!! So, so, so much!! Did you know that I worship the ground you walk on?? Did you know that you inspire me beyond words?? Did you know I like to repeat myself but use different wordings so as to make it look like I'm not a babbling idiot but an actual, thinking, human being? ...Er...yeah. Anyway! Point of fact; I LOVE THIS! I love these shorts~! |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2009-01-29 . chapter 5Aw, so cute and fluffy...with a little tangy bit of citrus at the end. Ambiguous, but that makes it. Awesome job, hun. ^_^ |
 konohafled 2009-01-09 . chapter 1nice description!
and even 'romantic'! |
 uberhaxxor of pwnage 2008-12-31 . chapter 4ooh, this story...collection...conglomeration-y thing is really cool! i like how you're tying them together with the whole 'senses' theme, and the individual drabbles are really good. |
 Selvanic 2008-12-31 . chapter 4Bravo. I particularly like this piece. And not because Sasuke is in it. I love the content, the wording, the interaction, the tension...it's brilliant. It really is. Your wording is fantastic, and plays exquisitely into your theme. After all, you took the simple notion of "sight" and applied it in a clever and postmodern way to your story. XD Very well done.
- Selvanic
PS: Can you tell I did a thing on postmodernism? |
 Selvanic 2008-12-31 . chapter 3I'm really enjoying these, hun. They're so amazingly descriptive and vivid and brilliantly written. You literally paint with your words. And I have to say, I've learned a -lot- from you. =3
- Selvanic |
 Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-12-30 . chapter 4Interesting little collection of drabbles, you've got going, here. They really seem like they could happen in the anime or the manga. :) Keep up the good work! |
 lovesrainscent 2008-12-30 . chapter 4Eep! Permit me to squee like a fangirl at that last sentence - that is so dead on for the whole Kabuto Orochimaru Sasuke mess. Ooh - you've reminded me again why I detest Sasuke so much. Great job! |
 lovesrainscent 2008-12-30 . chapter 3Powerfully evocative. You really captured the pungent stench I imagine is part of Kabuto's lab. Very descriptive. |
 Slashmistress Holly 2008-12-30 . chapter 2Very nice, I look forward to reading more :3 |