sa, are you going to write more? you should, its turning out really well.

Aw... Adorable, in a sick, twisted kind of way. It's like the Syelle version of the Eclaire plane ride!

Looking forward to an update!

Ha! Now that's excellent. I like the Sylar POV beginning to this chapter.

The last section was kind of confusing. Because of the lack of any identifiers, it was really hard to tell who was speaking when, which meant I couldn't get any sense of wth was going on here.

Hm... I like it. Syelle is always awesome to the power of a billion, so kudos on that.

I have more to say, but I don't remember what it was.

I really like this , Please continue
Though the timeline is a bit confusing

Interesting, continue!

I'm confused about the timeline, but othr than that,
i really like this.

thatwasawsomepleaseupdatesoon

eternalcrush

Great first chapter! I can't wait to see the rest of this!

I like your first chapter, it is interesting.
Oh,how I wish that the stupid writer's strike never happened and they went on with this storyline instead!
Update soon :)

this is awesome, please write next chap soon