That was better than most lemons that I read on this site, I literally taste the romance and passion better between Hinata and Naruto and it shows how much love they have between each other, besides raw lust and a quick bang.

Love it

Wow, when I was reading this story it just made me speechless. I love this story 3 D

OMG, really cute, i love it.

Greetings. n_n

i really liked the ending it was so romantic.

holy...that was kinda weird because i got hard from reading this lol

aww that was so sweet! awsum!

Me:0/0

Zetzu:NU I HAVE FAILED TO PROTECT YOUR INNOCENT MIND AGAIN!

Me:Z-Zetzu ive read worser things than this before _'

Zetzu:but your only ten!(its true)

Me:it was an acident!i didnt read the whole summary and it just happened DX!

Zetzu:-_-' if you promise not to tell i failed,then i wont tell your parents.

Me:ok!

Zetzu:this has been a kyu and zetzu reveiw (kyume)

Although I am not a hinata and naruto loveteam I liked this story very much it's very beautiful and romantic.

Amazing... Most of the lemons I read were usually not sweet so that got me thinking that maybe everybody wrote ones like those, that had just plain sex but now I see that there are other things you can add to it. Your story was sweet! Nice job!

wow

Amazing. It's been a while since I've read such a great story.

It was so sweet I really liked it.

I've never read anything quiet like this. It was more delicate, wise beyond my time, full of words from a vocab fit to fill the knowledge of a royal family. I'm proud of you. This will always remain in my heart and mind. Thank you.

wow. that was really romantic, but not mushy or lovey-dovey. i didnt think that was possible. you really have your very own style. i loved it.

That was really romantic and sexy. I think this is how it would really go if they did get married *Crosses fingers*