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Incu
2008-04-01
ch 60,
abuseHey, I've read some of your stuff before this and am a big fan of your contribution to the "Legendverse". Read about the Physics Police in another story and they caught my attention, so I started reading this and have been laughing my ** off ever since. I haven't left a review for anything in a long time or written anything in longer, but the way that this chapter started reminded me of a quote from a book I once read, "Give a man a fire and keep him warm for a day, set a man to fire and he's warm for the rest of his life." Just figured that you might like it and would like to hear some praise for your story, even though it's kinda old at this point.
O_____O
2007-01-15
ch 45, anon.
abusewe need more ralph! =)
O____O
2007-01-14
ch 34, anon.
abusei pity phil, deeply i do... to be related to ayeka and to suddenly have her want u... i pity indeed
CerberAsta
2006-07-18
ch 66,
abuseEvil demon REALLIFE has caused you to not update in... two to three years. That's a lot less than a month.

I am so glad I finally got to the last chapter so far. I am now going to pass out from Physics Police Ballad overload. Thank you and good ni-
CerberAsta
2006-07-18
ch 65,
abuseAh. Good ole 8-Bit Theater and the death of Binks. Greatest combination ever.
CerberAsta
2006-06-22
ch 48,
abuseWait. I thought the Animorphs fought the Kree. Ah, who cares. I don't know the beginning of that joke. What was it? (Chapter 48)
CerberAsta
2006-06-22
ch 46,
abuseIt's already been moved, but if they deleted it again, go with Misc. Anime.
CerberAsta
2006-06-22
ch 45,
abuseActually, it did have Phil, albeit he was on screen and not in person... still...
CerberAsta
2006-06-15
ch 43,
abuseError:

Boomer and Lance laughed. “No, that’s silly. This is just the combination briefing room and recreation lounge. The Holoprojector works good for both.” Lance sat

on one of the stools.

The enter/return there was not necessary and annoying. I believe that the author is just enter button-happy. Like Bloodredsandman is shift-happy!

Oh, me? I'm somewhere between 4 and 5 on the survey you posted.
CerberAsta
2006-06-15
ch 34,
abuseAh...hunh...so strange...
CerberAsta
2006-06-14
ch 28,
abuseARGH! THE FORMAT! IT BURNS US!

Please change the format of chapter 28. It's horrid... as if you pressed Enter/Return every half line... *puking*
CerberAsta
2006-06-14
ch 27,
abuseOne thing: Symbiotes are after brains, not spleens. However, spleens is a funnier word... hehehehe... spleen...
CerberAsta
2006-06-07
ch 24,
abuseWhat, did you really expect Cell to train the old fashioned way?

No.
CerberAsta
2006-06-06
ch 21,
abuseNo idea who Kione is...
CerberAsta
2006-06-02
ch 18,
abuseSo... Rei is Phil's girlfriend that he never sees?
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