this is a really well written story, completely heartbraking but at the same time really sweet. i was a bit confused at the end, is hermionie pregnant? if she is, is ron or fred the father? please carry this story on, it's really good.

That was heartbreaking. I was really well written :)

Oh man. So heartbreaking, but I love it.

Hey i loved this story ... thought of making it a multi-chapter fic? it would be awesome ...

so if i'm understanding correctly, ron is going to be the father of fred's child?

Wow, amazing story!

Wow, amazing work. Very well done. I have nothing to say, except that I was a little confused at the beginning because I thought Fred was supposed to be dead, so next time just leave a note before the story to tell readers that. Again, great job.

Kisses,
ShelbyElizabeth