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Selesteant
2009-10-24 . chapter 15
Very cute ending for a chapter! Sorry it took me so long to read it(i have been super busy)

More please : D
Cole the Demon Hunter
2009-10-12 . chapter 15
Great chapter! Glad for the update. Would leave a longer update but I have a paper due by midnight tomorrow and I haven't started it.
hptrump
2009-09-28 . chapter 14
my vote is Harry with Ginny all of the time.
Dedee Fuzzy-Slippers
2009-09-28 . chapter 14
no
Selesteant
2009-09-28 . chapter 14
you update when you can =) I love this story, and cant wait 4 more!!

I 4got when if i voted or not so letme make sure =)

he should die

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
SunshineChocolate
2009-09-28 . chapter 14
I love this story, I think Cedric should die. It would keep the story closer to canon. (but it obviously isn't.) I think that while writing a fanfiction, you should stay as close to canon as possible without ruining the story or the general idea.
Selesteant
2009-09-24 . chapter 13
a cliffie! update soon please!!

I am so glad u updated!! =)I love this story. Good chapter i am very suspcious of what will happen next!! =)
Cole the Demon Hunter
2009-09-21 . chapter 13
Well, hurry up with another update soon, and make it longer and all will be well.
Nikki Diamond
2009-08-18 . chapter 12
HAHA!
Ivy punched Cho!
very amusing, just as good as expected. I was Loling so much at this XD
Keep it up
Cole the Demon Hunter
2009-08-16 . chapter 12
Okay, I just read all 11 of your chapters and you have a nice story. Things that you might want to fix are your multiple spelling mistakes in the beginning chapters, especially the way you spell Cedric's name. Also, you start a few chapters not stating who's P.O.V. is was. Fix those two things and you will get more reviews! Great story and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Laur.an.russl
2009-08-16 . chapter 12
Great story can't wait to read more!
Selesteant
2009-08-15 . chapter 5
This is a review for chapter 11( for some reason i somwhow managed to review already)

OMG This is beyond dramaful lol.
Seamus and Ginny? very interesting, and I love the fite.

I ttly 4got about the triwizard tournie!!

GREAT, no AMAZING!! Job updtae =)
Selesteant
2009-07-29 . chapter 12
yea an update, and update!! (lol like my song? )

Oh cant wait to see who ginny is with, lol

Good job(like always!) =)
d-christen
2009-07-16 . chapter 2
Aw! First glance. :D
d-christen
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
Hahahh! I love it! :D :D
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