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InlovewithDracoMalfoy
2009-11-04 . chapter 1
SPRRY THIS IS BORNING
Vani from Argentina :)
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Well, where to start? 5 WORDS ONLY: BETTER THAN ROMEO AND JULIET.
Much more romantic, just loved it.
Short and concise. No extra word, no missing word!
I Love Yor Writting... Could you continue If It Was You, please? It is amazing how easy it seems for you to write! i'm really looking forword on finishing it! I want the to be together, please! ♥

Reply to: yo _ vanu _ 72 @ hotmail. com (with no spaces, of course)
IHeartDracoM
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
I really like this.

I cant even think of how to say more about it, its just...amazing.

Nothing in it is definitive...I love how its not blunt, it flows and its gentle.

Very good work...I'm going to read a happy fic now...

=)
Cullen-Black
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
Oh man. Wow like seriously wow I don't know where to start. Hmm how about I really enjoyed reading that story although I remember thinking they were both loony for putting themselves through the game but then again to each their own and Hermoine needed it as much a Draco did. The ending was beautiful and I'm happy they will never have to miss each other because they'll have an eternal afterlife together.
nostalgicdementia
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
it was perfect. i could not even hold my sobs while i'm writing this review.
~MonICA~
2009-09-19 . chapter 1
This is very interesting. I normally, don't like morbid stuff, but I found this story really hit home, somehow. Weird, right? I can't even relate to any character, specifically. I don't know who I empathize with, but I have this sense of acknowledgment and it's somehow made me feel less woeful about where my life is heading.

Thank you, Attica.
HH0247
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
Very good read. I don't necessarily like the dark, death-deal with it mind set of this story, but you write very well and I find myself really interested in how you work the words of your stories.

Very good stuff.
xzlioness
2009-09-01 . chapter 1
Amazing job. I was crying by the end of the story. I wish I can write like this.
brunetteangel94
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
Amazing.
One of the best stories I've ever read.
HarryPotterLover01
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
wow... this was... amazing... truly amazing. i loved it. you are very talented and i have never read anything like this before. i look forward to reading other works by you in the future.
keep up the great writing,
Charlene
skoolgirl101
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
i simply loved this story. it was completely different from anything else that i would read but it was amazing. as soon as i finished it, i wanted to review it. you deserve it. again i loved it!
boats and birds
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
I cannot describe how this story has affected me. The words you use to describe the subtle messages in life are astounding in their poetry. I hope one day to be able to create a piece of writing as moving as this.
Tsany
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
I just LOVE your story! This, actually, is my second time of reading it and I decided that you REALLY deserve a review:)) It's so much different from all the fics I've read and the storyline is AMAZING. Brilliant work:))
sarah
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
I never used to like one-shots. I thought they were boring...but that was amazing! great characterization...and i liked how you didn't do some cliche final words or whatever, because that doesn't happen. and the ending, it was so sad! I'm not even talking about her death, but when draco said that she would have been 'that girl' for him. perfect! wonderful!
JodieLove
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
I'd have to first say that this style of story isn't one that I usually read.

However, you make me love it anyways.

It was beautifully written. A real piece of literature.

And I must say, one day, you'll be one of those authors we study in english class.

:) Superb.
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