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Reviews for: Pause and Rewind
DisforDasey
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
Wow, that was amazing!! My goodness, girl. It never ceases to amaze me how awesome you are at writing!
I know this wasn't technically in the story, but this made me crack up laughing: 'But really, when it comes to relationships, you don’t really have “We need to talk.” followed by something pleasant.' I just thought that was hilarious! Anyways, wonderful job. :D
Allybooklover6677
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
Wow, this was an incredible story! I feel bad for not reading it a long time ago!!
Wepluvzyou
2009-01-10 . chapter 1
loved it!
Lanter
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
That was angsty, and sweet, and then ultimately dark. A bit darker than I expected but it was well written.
bsloths
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
What's this? I actually don't mind the Dally! Only for you, my dear! Nah, really, I like how the fic starts out. So many things happening at once!

Ew ew ew Dally **! Beth is making POPCORN to watch DALLY **? Ew! :)

The DASEY post-**, on the other hand, is really sweet.

You did such a good job with this idea. I kind of want to watch some Dasey ** now. Um, I mean, um, nevermind. ;)
Frogster
2008-12-30 . chapter 1
That was good! But do you think that Derek and Casey under one roof is the only reason they're attracted to each other, love each other? Yeah, it helps, because you see the other in day-to-day situations, good times, bad times--but I think part of it is that they're just absolutely perfect for each other. No one else. And we wonder why Derek has commitment issues...

Did you see Tuesday Afternoon Fever yet? Chock full of Dasey at the end--yum!

Happy New Year! Write again soon!
Leaf26
2008-12-30 . chapter 1
Nice job. Keep up the good work!
Super Reader
2008-12-30 . chapter 1
Whoa...now that's...I don't know what to call it. It's amazing but at the same time, it's just so sad. I feel bad for Sally, for Casey and for Derek.

So, to get things completely straight, Derek hit Casey? Like really hard or something? No wonder Casey left. I would have. This is very different from any of your other oneshots, but I think that's good. Breaching out and all that.

I've got a Dasey oneshot in the works. I don't know how it'll turn out, but hopefully it'll be ok. :D
Hagger10
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
That was a really good oneshot.
maxthieriotluvr
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
So, Casey left because Derek hit her? I have a hard time picturing that but you know I guess if he got angry enough it could happen. I'm one of the few who hates Sally with a passion but for the sake of the story I put that aside. Of course my favorite part was the Derek & Casey video but I got a bad feeling in my stomach when Sally confessed to her friend that Derek actually records her while they "get it on" it's quite disturbing to picture and I won't even try. Aside from the majority of sadness I loved it.
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
Wow...this was amazing. I couldn't believe how all of this went down. And my favorite part was of course the videotape of Derek and Casey. You could just feel their love through their words (your words). Thanks for that.

~Chica~
Dye-my-hands-violet
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
Thank you so incredibly much! I LOVED it! You have excellent diction, and I don't regret one bit that I asked you to make this for me! I'm so glad that you put effort into it too! :D It means a lot to me! :D

The tapes and the tenseness of the story was PERFECT. I read it, like, twice. Thank you so much! :D

*Huggles you*

-Rachel! :D
RogueSam
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
I thought this was really interesting. I really liked it. Good job!
Merino649
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
That was really good! I hope you do the oneshot in the future! Great job! :)
pheobe p.
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
Oh this needs a sequel of course!
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