Congratulations! You have officially joined the league of fanfiction writers that have made me laugh like a madman in front of a rented computer!

. . . ehe . . .*while dodging the disapproving glares of the store attendant* Great fluff fic please write more!

I really liked this story. I laughed all the way through. I feel sorry for Leggy. I get sick of every other story is single pairings. Het is more fun. I wish there were more stories with Haldir. He is my fave. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more works like this from you.

Brandy B.

Elrohir's married? Huh, didn't know that. I totally feel for Legolas. He seems to be gold to Mary-Sues. And Mpregs are just sick and awful. Totally hate them. You don't see Gimli in any Mpregs, or so I hope, and Mary-Sues never go for him.

Okay, loved the story but had one little problem, where was Aragorn? we only saw him right at the end, why was he not complaining, he's got more to complain about than anyone except Legolas. For a start the love of his life keeps vanishing, he keeps having mysterious brothers/sisters/daughters/sons turn up not to mention the angst, torture, h/c...

Can you do a sequel? With them all having a meal after the appointment and discussing how to prevent these things. E.g marriage? Death? No sexual organs?

I'm not ranting at you, I really love your story, especially when the Valar dropped in, poor Melkor, he didn't have much of a choice about evilness. and poor Elrohrir's wife, she must get so fed up of being ignored and not existing.

Write more! :)

One of the better parodies. Your inclusion of Turin and Manwe (among others) was terrific, and this really was great -- particularly Legolas's hiding. And Frodo and Sam's inching away from each other. Quite nice insanity, and with the OOC warning, I was fine. Nice job, good grip on dialogue.