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| Reviews for Hot Dogs |
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   Vanessa Osbourne 6/28/11 . chapter 1O_o Crypto is beginning to scare me...alot...XD Nice! I could totally see him acting like this! While this was quite interesting, you changed from past-tense to present tense, which is something you should try avoiding. You also spelled "special" as "specail" (I could see that as a typo, though.) And by "or just plan Crypto..." I think you mean "or just plain Crypto..." Eh, they're just a few mistakes. :P It happens. Anyway, this was pretty interesting. Nice job keeping the characters in...character. XD |
| QuariaN7 9/1/09 . chapter 1 Well, if you CAN beat 'em, EAT 'em! |
| grr580 6/9/09 . chapter 1 not only was that extramly funny but i can really see crypto and pox acting like that |
| DARKENING SHADOWS 4/14/09 . chapter 1 lol...lol...lol. |
| Invader Jay 1/27/09 . chapter 1 Hehe... He ate Ponsonby... hehe... |
| Marcipie 1/17/09 . chapter 1 HAHA That sounds like something Crypto would do. Talk to the hotdogs. lawl. I love the Furon, I gotta say. |
| manxscrubsnut 1/12/09 . chapter 1 liked this a lot! best game ever... meteor strikes rule... er the guns u mention only appeared in the 2nd game, not the first 1... just a minor point |
