That was super-steamy! It was so well-written and believable.

The character sure has a lot of guts approaching Alucard in his lair.

That was pretty fuckin' awesome! lol Alucard was totally in character, except for the mopey part. I couldn't really see that in him, but who knows? Lol The story was very sexy and intimate! ;3 I loved it. You're a great writer and I love all the descriptiveness and imagery you put into it. I even giggled at some points! The only thing that made me cringe was the little puppy names. lol

kinky, if you can find it in your heart and mind to make another lemon (or whatever you call it) I would be eternally greatful (lol eternally aka immortal), thanks!
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You're a fantastic writer, easily one of the best fan-fiction writers I've found yet. I love this story! Please keep writing. The sex you described, while maintaining dark fantasy elements, was very realistic. Not to mention, extremely arousing! Keep up the excellent work!

So...effing...awesome! Seriously, I'm buying my boyfriend red contacts...

wow, really well written! nice work:)

Girl, you are great writer. At the very beginning, you're story drew me in. I love that you showed apart of Alucard that is so obviously missing from the manga. Thank you. Now i'm off to read your next story.

Still the best story i've read... I actually drooled... ;/;

I liked it a lot. It was incredibly funny! While remaining sexy. Great balance of the two.

i read this before, and later i do it again... and now it seems that this is my round tree too :) im very hot right now, the last scene, with the blood from his fingers was the hottest from both chapters, I think its cos' he is REALLY seducing her, and succeeding i must add :)

*dies laffing* that was the best, most hilarious lemon i have ever read! im sooooo favorite-ing this one! i mean BARRY WHITE? *falls off chair and roflmao* i love it!

Wow

For pointing out in the first chapter that you were new to Hellsing I was very surprised how this turned out...which was very well done. Bravo on Alucard's attitude and emotions towards all of this; I applaud your work here.

Incredibly steamy. I LOVE IT! I actually blushed while I was reading this. Awesome job!

Lolz that's kinky!