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tokiohotel-twilight-luver
2009-05-21 . chapter 16
awesome i finally finished it now to read the third story :)
RaiRai13
2009-04-04 . chapter 16
YAY! HAPPY ENDING!

I hope that you made one with the wedding in it...WEDDINGS ARE AWESOME! Especially if their REALLY descriptive...YAY!

I LOVE THIS STORY! ME GO SEE IF YOU GOTS SEQUAL! XD

BRAVO DARLING! BRAVO!

CUDDOS TO UR STORY!
diesell
2009-03-14 . chapter 16
ahh last chapterr was amazing
(:
isn't there going to be a sequel? Or are you gonna leave it here...Either way is awesome
:D
I lovedd this chapterr...Mehh favoritee one
(:
I lurvee the way Bill proposed...lol 'I was wondering...'
haha
kaitlin08
2009-03-13 . chapter 16
Great chapter! It ended so happily! I still cant believe its the last chapter tho...i'll miss it for sure :( but at least i got to read it! :) Wonderful story and I hope you have a great day! Prayers and hugs, Kaitlin.
lovepie123
2009-03-13 . chapter 16
YAY! You know how I love happy endings! *hugz* :D They're all so cute together! Maybe the sequal can be about the Gs getting some girls! (yay aliteration!)
hellokittyxalex
2009-03-04 . chapter 15
This is such a sweet romantic chapter
(:
awwehh
Lisa
2009-03-01 . chapter 15
hey becca, how ya doin? come on msn sometime or call me!!:P hehe i wuved dis chapter:D dirty mind! ur worse than my tomi in the bathtub... *takes tom cookie* danke, luv u!
tokiohotelluver2
2009-03-01 . chapter 15
Yes! rd story please! I can't wait for another chapter! kinda sad that it's ending soon but kinda excited that there might be a 3rd story! :)
tokiohotelluver2
2009-02-27 . chapter 14
Yay I want a bill/tom shaped cookie! :) what rumors? I can't wait for another chapter!
SkyeGavin
2009-02-26 . chapter 1
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lovepie123
2009-02-25 . chapter 14
*couldn't bring herself to eat the Bill-cookie, but instead makes a shrine for it* YAY! Bill is AWESOME! Davy can go waste himself! :) I hope things keep working out. I love your stories!!
lovepie123
2009-02-19 . chapter 13
Poor Bill... :( I hope they sort it all out and she gets into rehab! Then they can be HAPPY! I hope your grandma gets better!
tokiohotelluver2
2009-02-17 . chapter 13
yes I is fine now! Omg Star told Bill! And he CRIED! Oh No's! Please update soon!
hellokittyxalex
2009-02-17 . chapter 13
Oh no...
Right when things were about to get better,
Another dilemma D:
lol
Virtual TH cookies for everyone :DD
And milk :)
tokiohotelluver2
2009-02-17 . chapter 12
Being hyped up on pain killers is kinda fun! I had to have some when I went to have surgery on my knee. But yea I can't wait for another chapter!
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