Given that the majority of the jokes weren't in my taste of humor, I can't give any piratical feed back, sorry.

In this case, Master Hand being an inept loser, and Crazy Hand a childish retard worked against the story. I know you have to keep things inconsistency in your story verse, and to be fair, I honestly admire you for that rather than just saying 'It works that way because I say so! Nya! Nya!' As I've seen many authors do.

An interesting introductory itemlist of great moments in your introspective work, my wonderful friend.

Nice scene with the Hands. I liked the part about Crazy Hand not having any eyes.

I liked the enemies Andross and Fox teaming up for the greater good. Something like that.

I liked Kirby lamenting that he can't become Sandwich Kirby. I'd wonder what type of sandwich he'd be.

Heh, seeing an Ike here reminded me of Ike getting it on with his teacher in SP.

Nice diss of PS3 types.

I liked ZeldaKirby. I wonder if Kirby would be no match for Zelda's views about men.

Nice Squirtle cameo.

I liked Ganon doing the gasp and look it's blah blah blah bit. They really overdo that on the Simpsons

I enjoyed Peach's little bit about Zoeys. Zoey is not a favorite name of mine. From that Nick show, to one of the girl puppets on the awful Modern Sesame Street.

Yeah I'd be embrassed too if I had a Bakugan costume.

Yeah I would imagine there would be pent-up jelousy over the Mario/Sonic Olympics game.

Sonic did sound quite jerkish throughout that whole scene. Scaring away poor Luigi. I wonder how Zelda feels about the way Sonic treats Amy.

I give this 5.

Keep up the good work, Diana!!