C'mon, Karen, this is actually really good!

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Wow Karen! This is actually really good! I'm very impressed! Edward and Jacob are so sexy together! Can't wait for more!

Wait, didn't Edward accuse Jacob of killing Bella in chapter 1, but then admitted to it in chapter 2? Or am I just crazy?

want more!

Aw! When will they hook up? Happy New Year!

*sigh* Jacob/Edward would be very hot... I can't wait to read more...

this story seems promising please update soon! :D and could you maybe not underline the next chapter? :S

I'd love to know where you are going with this story! ;)