Yo, i really like this. It was a nice, not too over done story..you could probably write more to it, but i like it where it is. Still, i am curiose to what Xander will choose. ^_~

I liked this because it was very true to the voices of the characters. I think you should continue with similar stories, just to elaborate. This is fine on its own, but it could also do with some stretching out.

Oh, this was so good. You wrote this a while ago, but I was hoping maybe you'd write a sequel? Or Chapter 2?

woohooo xanny's getting at it with g-man!!!