I need more keep going (thinks about next chapter while drooling over thoughts)

I need more keep going (thinks about next chapter while drooling over thoughts)

I really like your story and it has me guessing.
Keep up the good work!

that was great! i luved it ^_^ although i found the cursing unnecessary
anyway, will there be any more chapters? if so, when?

man whaty an awsome soltry very intersting

Hiya! I loved it. But hey, what about theother mermaids' kids...? And please, from now on, please keep your stuff t- or pg- rated. I quit reading a fanfic once because it got too dirty. Please, keep it clean. But seriously, you need to have a scene in Gackto's palace, or wherever it is he's keeping the mermaids, and Kaito. Keep on writing!

I NEED MORE PLEASE WRITE MORE!

next chapter
please

Have a vanilla bean frappuccino.
Ok, great story. But is Toru supposed to be in love with Seira? Because, if he is, she can't be in captivity for the whole story.

Ok. That was an awesome chapter. ^.^ (I'm never gonna remember all this new info ^.^') Did not see that comming. I take it the boys rescued Toru. ^.^ I think I just fell in love with this story even more. ^.^

kya! wait... what did gaito do with kaito... and what about Sara?

is seira in love with toru man that be juciey!!

I'm cool!

loging in is for not lazt peeps :D but anyway good chappie!

Hi! Ok, he might ask her about why he isn't a merman. Or maybe he'd ask her about the music and why it hurts. But, there is one thing that's missing, although you may be saving it for later: Toru HAS GOT to fall in love! Otherwise, how will he become superpowerful like these characters are supposed to be? Oh, and you kknow what you should do? You should giive him Kaito's powers. Prove Siera wrong. Ok, back to questions. He should ask her about Lucia a whole lot. I don't have much to offer, other than that.