|Reviews for Max and Fang So, you DO loooooove me!|
| 10thDoctorFan 8/16/10 . chapter 1
tell me you are writing more if not I will die ...no I am serious I'll die
| therealdork 7/8/09 . chapter 1
like it lots!
| scorcher505 4/27/09 . chapter 1
I think it's really good
| dusk3ttex01 1/25/09 . chapter 1
im with the PeruvianChick_but nontheless its still awesome
| faxlvr 1/2/09 . chapter 1
| PeruvianChick 12/30/08 . chapter 1
It was okay at first, but then when the flock came in, it got confusing. When did Fang leave? Was he outside her window?
And since you put the Voice speaking with the little "" marks I couldn't tell if it was someone actually SPEAKING or he was thinking to her.
Just . . . confusing.