Hi, Im ffrom Mexico, and I loved your fanfic. Would you like me to traduce it, no now you have two versions? I know there are traductors, but they are lame!

If you want me to do it, This is my email:

Really, your fic Rocks!

Wow, this was really good! This made me cry :)

Great job!

I don't even know what to say. You are such a gifted writer. You captured Peter and Lucy's faith perfectly. :)

God bless,

VFK

This offers some good POVs, much like my story, "The Train." (I would even say you used some of my ideas.) It isn't a bad story. You need to avoid switching back and forth between POVs, though. Pick one POV and follow through with it before going to the next. Switching back and forth only distracts your reader.

I loved this story. Thank you.

wow... that was very good! sad, but nice. i like it so much! good job!

You weren't kidding with the inspiration 'good morning' I love it :)

I haven't read all of the Narnia books but I found out that Peter, Lucy, and Edmund die in the seventh book by a train crash. is that what really happens? do you know what happens to Susan?

It really was a terrible way to end off the characters like that in the book. Well, at least they went back to Narnia/Aslan

by the way, that was a very touching short story you wrote. (sniffs)

I'm crying now, so well done ;) Short and sweet, I really enjoyed it.

This piece was incredibly bittersweet. I always imagined that the death at the train station was instant for everyone, but I had never thought about it this way before. Edmund's death was incredibly sad(and sweet, at the same time) as well as Lucy's. The "good morning" thing was incredibly...um, sweet? I think I need a new word. Basically, by the time I reached the end I was shivering, smiling, and tearing up all at the same time.

That's sweet and a bit sad. I agree that Peter and Lucy seem to have a connection, much like one that I think Susan and Edmund have.

I saw Eustace, Jill, Professor Kirke, Lucy, even Lady Polly dressed like royalty and glittering jewels, and King Trinian as well.

err...where's ed? :D