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Dark1luvs 10/16/11 . chapter 1
I know it may sound sadist of me to favourite this...but vegeta being this deep was so...wow. who would of thought son would kill himself...
thegreatone 7/14/03 . chapter 1
sad... you should make this into a full story instead of a one shot
Amadeo 6/15/03 . chapter 1
SAD! :( Vegeta killed himself, NO! The Prince of all Saiyajin cannot do such a low thing, his pride would not let him! It is highly dishonorable to kill oneself...he wouldn't survive everything Frieza had put him through to give that monster the last laugh in the end by doing to himself what that grotosque lizard would have done eventually! WHY! NO! Vegeta isn't stupid! He would never, never, EVER. NO matter how desperate he was for Kakarott's presence would he kill himself! He's way too strong for that! You write well, but you tread on a surface of fragile emotions and tender subjects. You wasted your time...please don't kill my favorite character. I'm not trying to be a flamer...just...just, I'm very disturbed by this. It is annoying. Anyway. You are a good author, just try for a better topic and put your twisted imagination to better use in the future, kay? ;)
kate 5/4/03 . chapter 1
hello! good fic! write more fics soon! keep up the writting! Update soon! bye
Mira-chan2 4/17/03 . chapter 1
aww that was horribly sad almost made me cry and notheing i read ir see on tv or a movie can make me cry

good job may be you can turn it into a story what happen befor Vegeta killed himself.

Mira-Chan
Escaflowne 3/14/03 . chapter 1
ok! this gave me a idea for an Inuyasha story! thanx so much! i really liked this story by the way...
VegetaGokuLover 4/27/02 . chapter 1
wow..omfg..this was awesome..so sad :'( The song really got you in the mood for this fic. I love "In The End". It's my fav song and it went perfectly with your fic.
Nekoni 3/15/02 . chapter 1
*sniff* that was really adorable... *sniffles* ya gotta write more G/V fics!
Jash 2/26/02 . chapter 1
Very good, so sad though. Very well written.
Felix McKraken 2/23/02 . chapter 1
YES! Death rocks. Minor mistakes. Good angst. Especially liked how you eluded to Goku having a problem, then how he killed himself. Nice touch on leaving it mysterious as to how he did it! *gives you a gold star*
Kakarrina 1/26/02 . chapter 1
Thanks so much for all the nice feedback! Thank you! Oh, hellfairy...of course you think it's wrong! What do you expect from me! I'm a pixy stick high author here! Again, thanks for the reviews!
hellfairy 1/25/02 . chapter 1
Ahg, girl! Incredible job. It was awesomely super :) So, I finally reviewed! And I stand by what I said: that was WRONG, just plain WRONG! And sad! Oh, *tear*. But good, very good. Kudos on the song choice as well. Ta Ta!
Cleodasia 1/24/02 . chapter 1
That was Excellent! I was listening to this song on my way home from work, thinking how much it fits G and V, it was so cool to see i'm not the only one who thought so. Please write more!
Tokimi 1/15/02 . chapter 1
That was awesome! And I hadn't expected that ending. And I love that song. So overall, it was great!
Ravenmoon 1/10/02 . chapter 1
Oooohhhh...the deeper, darker side of Kakarrina...very intriguing and boo-hoo-ish...wow... Very good! Write more, good buddy!
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