Nice! I love short stories that leave a strong effect on the reader. Bittersweet and well written... A great explanation of the duty of the Pen Holder.

A really good take on the story. This game was really good, I beat it in like 6 hours without stopping. The story was good and this is a nice epitaph to sum it up.

Short but long enough I think! Very strong I think.

Déjà vu explained but then time hollow style.

Perhaps risk a full story to this sometime?

Leance

Amazing! I beat the game this morning and I just had to see if there was any fanfic for it! This is my first one, hooray!

Love this point of view on the story. I never thought of it this way! Even though there is not much writing, by seeing what is there I can tell you're a very good, and experienced writer.

Oh, oh my. That was so short, but so sad. I never thought of the story this way...aw, that's just so sad :(. Good job! I really enjoyed it!

Hi. I was the one who asked for Time Hollow to come into this site, so here it is! WOOT! Anyway, great story and I hope that you make more in the near future.

Sincerely,

FE Girl 1