Aww, nice. Tai Shan De Lian Hua, eh? Hmn... Interesting, I haven't heard of that "elixir of life." Nice find!

The fic itself expresses Yue Ying's regrets and reminisces very well. Quite nicely done. I especially like that last line. You've portrayed their devotion quite well. Good job, and thank you.

great work but i dont quiet get i