A couple things:

1) Way too short to imbibe enough character development that I *think* you want. Either that, or the diction isn't punchy enough to convey complex emotions with compact sentiments. Work on this!

So cute! I loved it and I'm waiting for new drabbles soon!

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Wow, that was really great! It may of been short, but it was cute!

That was great :)

aww that was cute. i loved it
cant wait to read more of them!