It's been almost 4 years since you published this...but DAMN. This fiction is definitely a hooker and leaving with only that cliffhanger is just somewhat cruel. But if you're ever in the mood to continue this fic, please do. Thanks. :]

I love this story. Please, please, please update soon.

oh goodness! i cant wait until the next chappie! XD

update please!

woah... lovely intro. love it already. i know you said you wont update soon or frequently even, but i really want to see the next chapter out soon... please :D

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

Awesome start! Please update soon!

See ya later!

Ilove this chapter you should keep making them.

I can't believe that you left us with that! I need more. This is a really good start and I can't wait to see what happens.

You set up your characters well. I like the interaction they have, as well as the past. It sets the story up really nice here. Tala seems like he'd been an interesting character to me, but then again, he always is.

I hope that you'll update soon, even though you said that they are going to be far between.

Thank you for writing this.

the storys really gud but wats wid all OCs?no offence

i liked this story

update soon

Awesome. Need I say more? LOL

UPDATE! As soon as you can of course! I can't wait how Kai will seduce Hiromi!lol

hiya zulka i've already read ur story free write i hope u will updat soon by the way this story is absolutely awesome plez update soon ...happy new year

i like a lot! )

loved it.

cant wait for the next chapter.