I wish kishimoto would just do a flash back and tell us what happened on the tenth of october... but I honestly think this would probably be almost exactly what happened. I loce how this tied into your other fic csdr I wish I would have noticed it sooner.

Aww, I loved it. It was... a perfect retelling of the events as they might have been. From the beginning to the very end, this story did not lack anything, at all.

They are a family.

Wow, you are definitely going to be a midwife. No matter how much I like to be as close to the actual scene as possible, I could not write half the stuff you do.
Amazing.
And you're going to make one heck of a midwife, too.

Wow, that was an excellent story. I can see how it fits in with CSDR, but I also like it as a stand-alone fic. I think it should be part of canon, personally. :D
Poor Naru. Why couldn't Jiraiya take him right there? I mean, why didn;t they have a plan? Somone to hand naruto over to if anything happened to them. Even my parents have a plan like that. I hate that he was left alone after that. It's just nt right.

But anyway. That was my little spiel. Great, awesome, inspiring story. You blew me away yet again.

:D

Very good job.

nice story love. It does help a bit with the CSDR, but seeing as i've been back tracked and havent read the last..what ten chapters?! *curses shivy for stealing the net* but anyways, I wanted to know if you'd add another chapter that would explain what happened in the time Naruto was in the advisors care? or maybe I'm just an idiot and didnt get it ;p
well anyways... still a lovely story. *kisses cheek* you're a good writter, keep up the good work. talk to you later dear.
jaana

-RML009

omg that was soo good. and also very sad, im crying lol

great job!

That was very touching. The last scene with Jiraiya and Kushina was really beautiful.

I've got nothing to say so... That was wonderful.

Mi-chan...u made me cry...:'( twas sad!! but to be expected ^^

Was also good and now i fav

HmmYaoi

Hey long time no see!

Sorry that I've fallen off of CSDR but I will get back on when I have the time to catch up.

I hate you though right now, You are making me cry.

Wonderful story, you are pushing the bar higher up with each new chapter and each new story.

Keep it up love,

Dei-chan

Eh? Complete already? xD Loved!

-tears- beautiful, just beautiful...

*sobs* I have read quite a few of these 'Naruto birth' scenes, but this was without a doubt the most heart wrenching I've read and actually brought me to tears! Kudos to your beautiful writing and the wonderful capture of the love of their family.

Now excuse me whilst I go spend the next hour wailing~ XD Keep up the wonderful work!

June
x

Aw- that's so sad... But now I have inspiration for a great fic! ^.^

Aww...it was brilliant. And so sad, I wanted to cry. I always wondered what would happen in that period of time right before Naruto's birth and after. I would imagine it going something a bit like this. :)

Cry... That is seriously all I want to do. This was really m, powerful isn't good enough a word, damn I'm not sleepy any more, this just woke me up. I love you and all, but damn I can't say anything good about this, because there isn't a word good enough to describe such a masterpiece. Sob... Sob...

"One thing was for sure, he would most likely end up doing something huge and dramatic like his dad… something like saving the world." Seriously, if that isn't put in the actual Manga I will cry.

Love love